Emmy Grows Up is the rewrite and extension of the classic story
May Grows Up by author
Kathleen. Chapter 1 holds the same story as the original, with a few changes. Meet
Emmy, daughter of Bob and Julie, and Emmy's cousins, boy Ken and girl Charlie. They share a fun
vacation together at a campground and explore each other as a family.
Chapter List:
Part 1: Emmy Goes Camping
Chapter 0: Author's Introduction intro nosex Chase Shivers introduces the reader to the series and issues standard
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brother/sister aunt/nephew uncle/niece cousins Chase Shivers rewrites the classic story May Grows Up by author
Kathleen in a new voice. Chapter 1 holds the same story as the full original, with a
few changes. Meet Emmy, daughter of Bob and Julie, and Emmy's cousins, boy
Ken and girl Charlie. They share a fun vacation together at a campground and
explore each other as a family.
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uncle/niece mother/son mother/daughter aunt/niece brother/sister cousins Emmy and her cousins Charlie and Ken continue their vacation with
Julie, Bob, and Diane, along with their new friends Candy and Gus.
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father/daughter mother/daughter uncle/niece cousins Bob, Julie, and Diane share some night fun, then, as the vacation continues,
Emmy and Charlie watch as Gus surprises his wife Harriet with an unexpected
addition, and then Emmy's Dad joins the girls for more fun.
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oral masturbation father/daughter Emmy, Charlie, and Ken introduce Kimmy to the show-me-yours game, while
Bob, Julie, and Diane watch, then Emmy and Kimmy play in the shower while
Joe watches.
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brother/sister sisters cousins Kimmy gets drawn in deeper while at the same time
her father Joe gets to enjoy an evening with Diane, Julie, and Bob.
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ws voy exhib father/daughter mother/daughter brother/sister Emmy joins Gus, Harriet, and Candy in the shower while Ken, Kimmy, and
Charlie play, watched by Bob, Julie, and Diane. Later, Kimmy has her first time.
Chapter 7: The Last Full Day, Part 2 MMFFF mffgg12 inc anal rim creampie voy brother/sister cousins The last half of the last full day is filled with new experiences and new
fun for Emmy and the campers.
End of Part 1
Part 2: Emmy Goes Home, coming soon!
Comments on Emmy Grows Up:
Author
Date
Comment
Chase's Response
Wey
26 October 2017
I was backpacking during my vacation for a few weeks and at those alone times
I stumbled on your stories. I've been a patron of asstr for many years but I never really looked
at the *last updated* but relied more on the ftp sort by last updated. Happening on your stories
I felt great, I read one complete storyline in one sitting (Emmy grows up) and I adored it. I love
how you chose the character dynamic towards each other. It wasn't as predictable as 90% of the
stories are on asstr. I found a new favourite author which on top of that is an active writer still
and not a dead account. I'm looking forward to your new releases.
Thank you so much, Wey! I really enjoyed writing Emmy and being able to play more fast and
loose with the 'rules' than is usual for me. All the original thought in that long first chapter goes
to the author, Kathleen. I rewrote her great story May Grows Up in a new voice as Chapter 1,
then expanded into where I wish her story would have gone. I'm going to revisit that series in the
future once I've caught up and expanded some of my other stories.
essdubyaeff
25 October 2017
I just wanted to shoot an email to you and tell you how much I'm enjoying your Emmy Grows
Up series at ASSTR. It's very hot stuff. I also wanted to see if you were interested in reading
my stories. You can catch my stories at
https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/essdubyaeff/
Hope you to heard from you. Keep up the great erotica!
Thanks so much for reading Emmy! It has been a very fun little story to write. I'll get back
to it at some point, but I'm trying to get caught up on editing and publishing chapters/stories
I wrote during ASSTR's downtime first.
Thanks, also, for sharing your stories! I
read several earlier and really enjoyed them. Even the story about Jack and his father,
which isn't normally my thing, was very, very arousing and well done. You write very
concise, enjoyable fap stories!
Anonymous
13 February 2017
Love this series. Can't wait to read the start of Part 2. Maybe Emmy or her
cousins get pregnant or at least have pregnancy scares?
Thanks Anon! I won't reveal the upcoming scenes, but I think you'll enjoy where
things go when I pick up this series again.
Anonymous
16 January 2017
Well done story,hope you continue
Thank you! I will have more chapters soon, thanks for reading!
Anonymous
11 January 2017
Hello, great story, but Ken did Emmy's butt already in chapter 1.
Damn! How did I forget that scene! Thanks for catching it! I've edited that
part of Chapter 7 to reflect the earlier scene. Thanks again!
Anonymous
8 January 2017
Sorry but it is very inferior to your other stories, especially Flower Petals.
There is no sense of evolution of the plot, just go into fucking straight off,
and as a result reads seriously fake
Emmy is a remake of the classic story May Grows Up. I know this is
a very different style than my usual, and as I explained in the Intro and my Chapter
1 author's note, I wanted to try to keep the same spirit and style as the original. This
meant not dwelling or even mentioning the moral/ethical/risky behavior concerns and just
diving into the sex scenes, just like the original.
I definitely did this on
purpose, trying to see if I could do a pure fap-story instead of a morality play. I have
no intention of trying to turn Emmy into one of my usual stories, sorry. I
certainly understand this isn't to everyone's liking, especially those who read my stories
like
Flower Petals or
Groundhog Nights.
Still, I have some readers who are enjoying
Emmy and it has been very fun to write because it is more of a
stream-of-consciousness rather than a plot and character-driven story which requires a lot
more concentration from me. Sorry this isn't something you like. Perhaps you might better
enjoy my other new series,
Ahead of the Curve, which is a light-sex redemptive romance.
Anonymous
5 January 2016
Great story. There must be more you could write about this
family. Maybe more relatives?
Thanks! Plenty more to come, I promise ;)
Anonymous
4 January 2017
Very hot
Thanks!
Gary
2 January 2017
I have just read the intro, and if your rewrite is as good as the
rest of your work, then you will revive a classic from the mud. Great,
hot story that suffered from misspelling, repetitive language,
disconnected narrative and other distractions. I will write further
after reading.
Thanks, Gary! I definitely would love to have your feedback since you are
familiar with the original. I thought the Ozman edited version of the original
did a pretty good job of cleaning up a lot of those issues without messing up
the story itself.
Comments on Emmy Grows Up:
Hope you to heard from you. Keep up the great erotica!
Thanks, also, for sharing your stories! I read several earlier and really enjoyed them. Even the story about Jack and his father, which isn't normally my thing, was very, very arousing and well done. You write very concise, enjoyable fap stories!
I definitely did this on purpose, trying to see if I could do a pure fap-story instead of a morality play. I have no intention of trying to turn Emmy into one of my usual stories, sorry. I certainly understand this isn't to everyone's liking, especially those who read my stories like Flower Petals or Groundhog Nights. Still, I have some readers who are enjoying Emmy and it has been very fun to write because it is more of a stream-of-consciousness rather than a plot and character-driven story which requires a lot more concentration from me. Sorry this isn't something you like. Perhaps you might better enjoy my other new series, Ahead of the Curve, which is a light-sex redemptive romance.